Friday, April 04, 2008

a furst bummer duntin
throuch the forsythia:
sleeperie lik




a first bee bumping
through the forsythia:
sleepily

5 comments:

  1. I feel like that bee and wonder if it is a time lag, end of the week or just what it is - spring. Nicely written, John.

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  2. still numb from the cold?
    nice

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  3. i like this line three very much!

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  4. They dont seem to be coping too well with the changeable weather, they keep dying in my garden.

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