Thursday, April 03, 2008

rairin o saws -
new railrod
throuch the blawort




roaring of saws -
new railroad
through the bluebells
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4 comments:

  1. polona11:01 AM

    ouch!
    always painful to see even if necessary (is it?)

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  2. Masago6:27 PM

    I love railroads! Nice.

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  3. J. Andrew Lockhart9:05 PM

    I really like L3!

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  4. jem4:12 AM

    Sad reality, but great haiku. The contrast between the saws and the bluebells is so strong.

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