Wednesday, February 06, 2008

auchteent burthday -
tethert tae'r pawrents' yett
balloons raxin tae be lowst




eighteenth birthday -
tied to her parents' gate
balloons struggling to be free

5 comments:

  1. having two young daughters, I'm just not ready for this!

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  2. Reminds me of: Treasure lies at home, but if you want to find it, you have to travel abroad.

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  3. Well done. Its all there, in that tugging string.

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