Friday, February 08, 2008

agin the kirkyaird wa
the tide
showdin




against the churchyard wall
the ocean
rocking

5 Comments:

Blogger Borut said...

A great triptych: The mystery of life. The birds of our innermost beings burning with inner fire. Beyond the church of our formal worship, the secret treasure in the cosmic sea…

1:41 AM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice -- Borut said so much! wish I could comment like that -- it's poetic in its own way. :)

8:14 AM

 
Blogger polona said...

i think 'rocking' is a great choice with all its implications

12:07 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

Cool.

4:05 PM

 
Blogger Tikkis said...

I read this first as knocking...
rip

12:25 PM

 

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