Tuesday, December 18, 2007

brennin leaves -
reek hoves
claps tae the brainches




burning leaves -
smoke rises
clings to the branches

4 comments:

  1. Simple, but oh so effective!

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  2. burning leaves -
    rising smoke finds
    each eye.

    :-)

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  3. I like that, I can even smell it.

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