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Tuesday, December 18, 2007

brennin leaves -
reek hoves
claps tae the brainches




burning leaves -
smoke rises
clings to the branches

posted by John McDonald at 12:45 AM

4 Comments:

Blogger Richard Mark Kay said...

Simple, but oh so effective!

11:23 AM

 
Blogger polona said...

very nice!

11:49 AM

 
Blogger Masago said...

burning leaves -
rising smoke finds
each eye.

:-)

5:51 PM

 
Blogger Ashi said...

I like that, I can even smell it.

2:56 AM

 

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