Saturday, June 09, 2007

aw day
sneddin treen -
a bog on ma pillae




all day
pruning trees -
a bug on my pillow

6 Comments:

Blogger John McDonald said...

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6:29 AM

 
Blogger John McDonald said...

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7:32 AM

 
Blogger John McDonald said...

dear polona vaugh and andrew thanks for your comments on the original post.I've changed the last line to something that happened later that day I thought it more interesting thanks again
john

7:36 AM

 
Blogger polona said...

i like the new take :)

2:20 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

Very amusing!

9:18 PM

 
Blogger Borut said...

Dead asleep!? Reminds me of a tick deep in my knee, in the evening, after a day of roaming in the woods...!:)

1:59 AM

 

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