Wednesday, June 06, 2007

atween the bodach
an the speuggie:
brukken breid




between the old man
and the sparrow:
broken bread

7 comments:

  1. Enough. What is enough? What is enough is enough!?:)

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  2. Well done, John!

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  3. A wonderful poem, dear John! I read here about a symbolic meaning of the bread: the bread as a non-verbal means of communication between the old man and the little bird.

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  4. perfect -- it's all there.

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  5. dang. great symbolism. perfect.

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  6. Very powerful! Thats all I can say!

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