Tuesday, February 13, 2007

the nourice taks bluid
sin throuch the winnock
rugs oot the reiddest tulips




the nurse takes blood
sun through the window
draws out the reddest tulips

6 Comments:

Blogger Dana-Maria Onica said...

A very inspired juxtaposition, John. Also I remark the strong contrast between pain, illness and the red beautiful flower. Although the flower is cut and will die at sunset. I like very much your poem.

5:40 AM

 
Blogger magiceye said...

amazing imagery......loved it!

5:53 AM

 
Blogger polona said...

excellent, john!

10:04 AM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice combination

10:27 PM

 
Blogger Borut said...

Earth blood test, high time, could be seriously ill!?:)

1:55 AM

 
Blogger Ashi said...

Strange thoughts - and absent donor?

1:08 PM

 

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