Sunday, February 18, 2007

lavein kirk
craw stauns in ma rod
leukin forritsome




leaving church
crow stands in my way
looking defiant

8 Comments:

Blogger Juhani said...

You didn't give enough offertory?

8:20 AM

 
Blogger polona said...

love it.
and lol to tikkis' comment

9:15 AM

 
Blogger jem said...

Great. They are such naturally assertive birds - we dare not step out of line!

9:35 AM

 
Blogger WorkingWords100 said...

The crows here chase cats! I don't like them.

John, please contact me off-line.

3:26 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

Great haiku, I also love Juhani's comment (is Juhani Tikkis?).

7:23 PM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

there's a lot you can see in this one

10:17 PM

 
Blogger Borut said...

Why didn't you go back to church, John!?:)An omen?:)

1:33 AM

 
Blogger Tikkis said...

juhani = tikkis, blogspot seemed to accept my comment without signing in, but took my first name.

There is no blog named 'juhani'.

10:17 AM

 

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