Tuesday, July 31, 2012

weedin pish-the-beds  -
his fite heid
amang fite heids




weeding dandelions  -
his white head
amongst white heads
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3 comments:

  1. Gillena Cox4:54 AM

    nice; alliterative and resonating


    much love...

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  2. Bill7:37 AM

    Nice moment. The word play adds to the vividness of the scene.

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  3. Gwil W1:26 PM

    Löwenzahne!

    Lion's teeth.

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