Tuesday, June 26, 2012

the aul chiel hirples alang  - 
the burn
dookin an heavin




the old man limps along  -
the stream
dipping and rising
Posted by at

3 comments:

  1. Gillena Cox5:21 AM

    two age olds, one relentless, one persevering; nice juxtapositioning


    much love...

    ReplyDelete
  2. Bill10:31 AM

    A most eloquent visual rhyme.

    I've been unable to post poems or comments for the last couple of weeks.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Tikkis12:54 AM

    Got something in my own mind ... -)

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)