Monday, April 02, 2012

intae the gairden
a gled  -
stramash o weengs




into the garden
a hawk  -
cacaphony of wings
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5 comments:

  1. Gwil W11:49 AM

    I think 'stramash' outdoes cacaphony by mile ;) !!!

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  2. Magyar5:00 PM

    stramash
    wings beat against its chest
    hunter hawk

    __I like stramash too. Here, a metaphor of 'thunderous,' and I have -stolen- that scots word.
    __Nice John! _m

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  3. Frank...6:29 AM

    I agree, 'stramash' outdoes cacaphony by mile. Nice set, John...

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  4. Gillena Cox5:31 AM

    good audible appeal

    much love...

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  5. Juhani Tikkanen12:51 AM

    afterwards
    a deep
    silence

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