Friday, August 05, 2011

dischairged sodger 
stravaigs the causeys
stappin anely on the crecks




discharged soldier 
wanders the streets
stepping only on the cracks

6 comments:

  1. This reminds of a book my husband just finished about a civil war (US) veteran taking to the roads to find peace from the war. Very nice.

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  2. nice one John but i'm reading also a mood of sadness


    much love...

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  4. ... and, I think, still assuming the risks. Fine one John.
    _m

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  5. we do have veterans like that...may be all countries have them; good haiku, John,

    wishes,
    devika

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