Thursday, May 26, 2011

Voar ferr  -
crans
ding-dangin




Spring fair  -
swifts
helter-skeltering

9 comments:

  1. onward to summer

    much love...

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  2. helter-skelter was good. good one John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. sounds great both ways!

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  4. A very visual poem John beautifully rendered...

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  5. Birds... in all directions!

    Fine sight John!
    _m

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  6. wonderful weekend fairs springing up - ran many a hill race John, but was never so swift :)

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  7. Ha ha... causing an inner giggle.

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  8. Fabulous! Swifts are probably my favourite bird, but even so, this is one of the best haiku I have read this year. Good stuff.

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  9. I just re-read the Scots version. Love all 6 syllables of it

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