Effective juxtaposition of life and death, John -- Good haiku, wishes, devika
Wow, that works so well. I really like this one.
Great juxtaposition, John.
gratefully awakening no doubt to say goodbye to those passed on; much love...
Gulls, funeral bells flying.Fine one John. +m
A bitter-sweet moment, John. A nice haiku...
good one John
again 6 a.m.and the crows waken me with their joy
"keening" is a great choice, acccurate and evocative.
Effective juxtaposition of life and death, John -- Good haiku,
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devika
Wow, that works so well. I really like this one.
ReplyDeleteGreat juxtaposition, John.
ReplyDeletegratefully awakening no doubt to say goodbye to those passed on; much love...
ReplyDeleteGulls, funeral bells flying.
ReplyDeleteFine one John. +m
A bitter-sweet moment, John. A nice haiku...
ReplyDeletegood one John
ReplyDeleteagain 6 a.m.
ReplyDeleteand the crows waken me
with their joy
"keening" is a great choice, acccurate and evocative.
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