good buzz!like the strong contrast in colour
There is a subtile danger in these lines. Especially the Scots haiku with its alliteration in line one and its sharp line three. Good one, John.Best wishesRalf
and maybe a squint of yellow eyes and soft meowsmuch love...
__Good John... love the thought's wander to... the black face and the daffin eyes. _m
Excellent poem, John. It reminds me of an old one of yours involving a crow on it's green eggs.
A cat ku that avoids cuteness. Well done.