sad, John...read of a bomb scare in UK; didn't read of bombed houses morning chillawakened by the tremors of a shivering earth Indo-Pak earthquake (rather than Indo-Pak war) this morning leaving tremors in Delhi as well...no casualities....wishes
Just enough ambiguity whether the flute is literal or metaphorical.This avoids sentimentality and melodrama. Most effective.
A melancholic post, John...
the book i'm reading now has an a after war theme; your haiku is pertinent---much love---
Deeply felt, John.Sincerly, _m
sad, John...read of a bomb scare in UK; didn't read of bombed houses
ReplyDeletemorning chill
awakened by the tremors
of a shivering earth
Indo-Pak earthquake (rather than Indo-Pak war) this morning leaving tremors in Delhi as well...no casualities....
wishes
Just enough ambiguity whether the flute is literal or metaphorical.This avoids sentimentality and melodrama. Most effective.
ReplyDeleteA melancholic post, John...
ReplyDeletethe book i'm reading now has an a after war theme; your haiku is pertinent
ReplyDelete---much love---
Deeply felt, John.
ReplyDeleteSincerly, _m