this is where the American word 'fall' is tempting - something like 'after the fall' (but probably not exactly that)the 2nd 3rd lines are brill.
A great set, John. I too like the 2nd and 3rd lines very much...
Tormento necessário. Natureza vive...
Sometimes you can almost feel them. Good one.
Just love 'sheuch' sound.
arteries clogging; dosent sound too good to me, take care of yourselfmuch lovegillena
Nice one. I see what Poet in Residence is driving at.
very effective jux, as always...hope this isn't about your heath... wishes, devika
In my Autumn...Nice paralell, John! _m
well done, John. Happy birthday!
__John... I was unaware of your Birthday, but now that I am, Cheers!