Monday, October 25, 2010

freest mizzlin -
day muin
dwines intae the cluds




frost melting -
day moon
disappears into the clouds
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8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi3:33 AM

    good haiku, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Magyar3:42 AM

    Day moon; lovit John.
    _m

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  3. Gillena Cox4:49 AM

    nice juxtaposition; i myself have been enjoying this morning's moon

    much love
    gillena

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  4. Frank...5:14 AM

    A nice juxtapostion of images, John...

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  5. Gordon Mason5:47 AM

    that first line in Scots really emphasises the cold!

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  6. Gwil W9:13 AM

    Love this one and the previous one.

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  7. Ashi11:44 AM

    and it did - very good John.

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  8. Dave Serjeant4:43 AM

    good one John

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