Monday, October 25, 2010

freest mizzlin -
day muin
dwines intae the cluds




frost melting -
day moon
disappears into the clouds

8 comments:

  1. good haiku, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Day moon; lovit John.
    _m

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  3. nice juxtaposition; i myself have been enjoying this morning's moon

    much love
    gillena

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  4. A nice juxtapostion of images, John...

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  5. that first line in Scots really emphasises the cold!

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  6. Love this one and the previous one.

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  7. and it did - very good John.

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