Monday, September 06, 2010

i the perk
craws pikein faw'n aipples
...cooried junkies




in the park
crows spiking fallen apples
...huddled junkies
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5 comments:

  1. Magyar3:56 PM

    I can see the crows... joustion over the apples. _m

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  2. Paul Smith3:34 AM

    I feel the sadness here John of the natural 'crows spiking...' against the unnatural'junkies' spiking. Really well done.

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  3. Dave Serjeant5:18 AM

    brilliant haiku, John

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  4. ImageNations10:20 AM

    nice haiku. the jux is great.

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  5. Frank...1:24 PM

    A wonderful haiku, John...

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