Monday, July 19, 2010

proggin fir the douceness:
the humminburd
...the luvers




probing for the sweetness:
the hummingbird
...the lovers

7 comments:

  1. __One of my favored "wing-folk," the humming birds.
    __Fine one, John! _m

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  2. is that hummingbird any sweet...i mean its song?

    ha!, good one, John :)


    wishes,
    devika

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  3. I love this... probing for sweetness... the lovers... thanks

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  4. and do you know that the humming bird can fly backwards; is this a present tense or a remembrance in the past haiku

    much love
    gillena

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  5. well that first line had me stumped I have to admit ...

    Gillena, maybe it's "present" tense; you know, a box of chocolates...

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  6. This is full of ... life and sweat and tears and and and ... Great.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. lovely comparison

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