Thursday, August 20, 2009

watterside treen
cowpt -
fush throuch the brainches




riverside trees
toppled -
fish through the branches

4 comments:

  1. storms there too??
    and the fish also seems struggling....who can save this earth!

    God alone...GOD ALONE!

    nice poem, i should say

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. An almost surreal world is visible here John out of a very concrete image. Great!

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  3. destruction and still ...

    life

    very nice, John.

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  4. a very credible scene; particulary during the rainy season; nice poem

    much love
    gillena

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