a fine set
not to have any dream...life may be quite a difference mcdonald san, I'm thinking...
i like the quality pathos in this set and the issue of ambivalence in the dream theme which raises the question do we also dream of another lifemuch lovegillena
nice poem, John wishes, devika
Anither? Is the dreamer dreaming in Scots? Great sounds of "r" in both haiku. Good work!Best wishesRalf
the movement in this is stunning, John. the mood, perfect.
a fine set
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nice poem, John
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devika
Anither? Is the dreamer dreaming in Scots? Great sounds of "r" in both haiku. Good work!
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Ralf
the movement in this is stunning, John. the mood, perfect.
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