Monday, August 11, 2008

moch agin
ma lichtit winnock -
a derk warl at's rig




moth against
my lighted window -
a dark world at its back

8 comments:

  1. can't quite explain why
    something about the last line -
    a pleasure to read

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  2. I see this as though the moth has entered a floodlit stage and you are the audience.

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  3. "a dark world at its back"
    >> Do not we all leave some darkness behind? << _m

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  4. The nights are getting darker and darker over here also.

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  5. An especially rich one.

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