Wednesday, June 25, 2008

the hern gaes stieve -
chork o
the bodach's laiky buits




the heron stiffens -
squelch of
the old man's leaky boots

5 comments:

  1. to keep still or to fly away?
    food or danger?
    love it

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  2. Strong image. I like the sense that the old man is probably stiffened to by age.

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