Monday, May 12, 2008

the sin's raik
het on the airn bink:
a bodach rists




the sun's journey
hot on the iron bench:
an old man rests

8 comments:

  1. Warm image. More and more I want to switch places with that old man on the hot bench.

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  2. I like the way the sun and the man find a way to meet, if only in passing.

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  3. .
    I love that sun's journey "hot on this iron bench"!

    The scots version just looks amazing. Have you considered issuing a CD of bi-lingual haiku?


    all my best,
    Alan

    The deadline’s getting close!
    The With Words International Online Haiku Competition
    Half of any profits for literacy work with children.

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  4. An old-age warmup!:)

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