Warm image. More and more I want to switch places with that old man on the hot bench.
I like it!
I like the way the sun and the man find a way to meet, if only in passing.
.I love that sun's journey "hot on this iron bench"!The scots version just looks amazing. Have you considered issuing a CD of bi-lingual haiku?all my best,AlanThe deadline’s getting close!The With Words International Online Haiku CompetitionHalf of any profits for literacy work with children..
An old-age warmup!:)