Wednesday, November 14, 2007

toon causey -
abodie tint i the haar
o thair ain braith




city street -
everybody lost in the fog
of their own breath

5 comments:

  1. great observation!

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  2. wonderful description! I hate the weather, though.

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  3. Wow. This is a great one. I don't really like cities, and try to avoid them. If I find myself in one in winter I'll try to hold your words in mind - I know they will make me like it a little more.

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  4. As a vessel sailing
    in the foggy sea.

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