Wednesday, November 14, 2007

toon causey -
abodie tint i the haar
o thair ain braith




city street -
everybody lost in the fog
of their own breath

5 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

great observation!

10:32 AM

 
Blogger Masago said...

Love it!

6:15 PM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wonderful description! I hate the weather, though.

8:50 PM

 
Blogger jem said...

Wow. This is a great one. I don't really like cities, and try to avoid them. If I find myself in one in winter I'll try to hold your words in mind - I know they will make me like it a little more.

10:07 AM

 
Blogger Tikkis said...

As a vessel sailing
in the foggy sea.

10:20 AM

 

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