mids the burdsang
craw twangs sumthin's intimmers
oot frae the taur
amidst the birdsong
crow twangs something's intestines
out from the tar
posted by John McDonald at 8:36 AM
Sunday, October 28, 2007
craw twangs sumthin's intimmers
oot frae the taur
amidst the birdsong
crow twangs something's intestines
out from the tar
- amang the leaves a fedder - dichtit smeeth bi arct...
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- toon sirens skirl - a fou muin agane ...ayewis smi...
- sauch leaves fawin - oor lest fareweels willow...
- coortin cupple a coffee atween thaim - stame heav...
- throuch the nicht the wund - leaves scartin the c...
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- on a stob a craw tentie - fite burds abuin the ki...
5 Comments:
so it goes...
good one!
1:02 PM
eww, gross.
but perfect wording.
1:40 PM
Cool image. Use of "twang" is new to me but makes sense.
5:52 PM
really interesting :)
8:53 PM
Gorey but fantastic. One must write about the dark as well as the bright - and you handle both extremes so well!
5:03 AM
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