a hinmaist koi yirdit -
anely sheddaes nou
in the dub
a last koi buried -
only shadows now
in the pond
posted by John McDonald at 11:10 AM
Friday, September 14, 2007
anely sheddaes nou
in the dub
a last koi buried -
only shadows now
in the pond
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6 Comments:
Very good, but very peacefully sad too. I like the thought of the contrast between the coloured koi and the colourless shadows.
11:24 AM
Buried...sad?
4:35 PM
Poignant.
4:36 PM
To coy to ask about 'koi' and why...
1:33 AM
oooh, I like this one!
9:51 PM
I look at sadess; I see memories.
_M
2:45 PM
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