Thursday, August 02, 2007

furst brummles
bricht een
gove at me frae the buss




first brambles
bright eyes
gaze at me from the bush

2 comments:

  1. they are beginning to ripen here too

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  2. This one keeps calling me back. I think its the ambiguity about the eyes. I wonder if the eyes are the berries or are an eater of the berries. I want to be there to peer a little closer.

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