Friday, July 13, 2007

dugs stour
throuch the sned girse -
a green haar




dogs race
through the cut grass -
a green mist
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5 comments:

  1. Masago5:57 PM

    Vivid.

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  2. J. Andrew Lockhart11:47 PM

    nice :)

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  3. Borut2:17 AM

    Lively!:)

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  4. Ashi8:05 AM

    vividly imaginary picture John, very good.

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  5. Unknown3:05 AM

    John san, thank you for your nice haiku.
    Your haiku is written by two languages.
    One is English that I can understand, another is ?? similar to English.

    sakuo.

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