the roddens
fawin agane this year
faw ontae's mool
the rowan berries
falling again this year
fall onto his grave
posted by John McDonald at 7:57 AM
Thursday, October 26, 2006
fawin agane this year
faw ontae's mool
the rowan berries
falling again this year
fall onto his grave
- the pram skitein roon the cunyie faither an bairn ...
- heich wunds bairns an leaves in a bourach...scuil-...
- jile warder's hoose pikit weer sheddaes athort the...
- craws an maggies jinkin mang the brainches shooers...
- monks chaunt wund gurls the lown no fasht monk...
- a far awa skelloch the laddie's dug hus rin afore ...
- burn in spate unnerwatter leaves stour alang ...
- someplace i the rouky perks muck spreidin some...
- atween shooers craw an me tentie o the lift be...
- hairst shill faw'n leaves stert tae cleek autu...
4 Comments:
poignant!
i would consider omitting "fall" in L3
11:13 AM
thanks for the observation polona but I feel the second fall in L3 indicates: my friend has died since! last year without it I feel they would be simply falling again as they have done every year on to his grave,which is not the case
john
2:10 PM
lovely image.
4:08 PM
thanks for the explanation, john.
4:22 PM
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