tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post4824569237192881598..comments2024-03-21T04:00:09.881-07:00Comments on zen speug: John McDonaldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-35532111103613936972012-08-25T19:32:43.628-07:002012-08-25T19:32:43.628-07:00Might the movement be specified as a ripple?
moon...Might the movement be specified as a ripple?<br /><br />moonless night –<br />in the river<br />rippling stars<br /><br />Just a thoughtBillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-61330103616729708382012-08-22T13:22:44.943-07:002012-08-22T13:22:44.943-07:00I like the idea but I think the adjective 'dar...I like the idea but I think the adjective 'dark' may be superfluous - saying the same thing twice. Gwil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03305768121713053837noreply@blogger.com