tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post7888709083239367972..comments2024-03-21T04:00:09.881-07:00Comments on zen speug: John McDonaldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-30509566979893132572011-04-20T21:25:52.008-07:002011-04-20T21:25:52.008-07:00strange and mysterious haiku, John...but resolves ...strange and mysterious haiku, John...but resolves it too, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-80676074622679236182011-04-20T12:20:48.825-07:002011-04-20T12:20:48.825-07:00There is definitely mystery in this one John. I li...There is definitely mystery in this one John. I like it a lot...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-70312594649533891432011-04-20T10:09:05.465-07:002011-04-20T10:09:05.465-07:00Just wonderful. The first lines set up a mystery t...Just wonderful. The first lines set up a mystery that's delightfully solved in the last. And that song, coming from a hole in the ground, sends this soaring.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-39090162354262269982011-04-20T09:40:07.678-07:002011-04-20T09:40:07.678-07:00There I was digging this 'ole - so big an'...There I was digging this 'ole - so big an' sort of round it was ...<br /><br />A lovely humorous you painted picture John!Gwil Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03305768121713053837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-24476056530264971422011-04-20T04:18:52.446-07:002011-04-20T04:18:52.446-07:00And the hole kept getting bigger!And the hole kept getting bigger!Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-40435222454587313102011-04-20T03:47:10.600-07:002011-04-20T03:47:10.600-07:00Crescendo, with each shovel thrown.
__Well seen, J...Crescendo, with each shovel thrown.<br />__Well seen, John. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.com