tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post3036035431766308039..comments2024-03-21T04:00:09.881-07:00Comments on zen speug: John McDonaldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-78683944645133615452009-12-21T02:59:47.463-08:002009-12-21T02:59:47.463-08:00sombresombremagiceyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17848851692951192508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-510215498321109522009-12-18T18:23:35.744-08:002009-12-18T18:23:35.744-08:00desert sands
this life's drive sustained
an o...desert sands<br />this life's drive sustained <br />an oasis<br /><br />__I honor the spirit of those that have the will to fight... 'the crossing.' <br />__Grand vision, John. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-46510739154219011692009-12-18T11:42:27.598-08:002009-12-18T11:42:27.598-08:00A striking poem John...A striking poem John...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-51407768626152258502009-12-18T01:41:20.180-08:002009-12-18T01:41:20.180-08:00most live ins at the Hospice here in TT are elderl...most live ins at the Hospice here in TT are elderly folk who seem to shrivle as they grow older; the <i>large bed</i> in your poem is a strake contrast to our smallness in the scheme of life<br /><br />much love<br />gillenaGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-86314687893033696122009-12-17T14:24:22.781-08:002009-12-17T14:24:22.781-08:00There is a deep meaning here and I simply love thi...There is a deep meaning here and I simply love this piece. The contrast between the two, as noted, is, as Ralf said, "Well done."<br /><br /><br />TInside our hands, outside our heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04135186996993725893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-6142192718428498992009-12-17T11:12:27.700-08:002009-12-17T11:12:27.700-08:00At least we find a place to rest and to leave. The...At least we find a place to rest and to leave. The juxtaposition of a large bed and a short time to live is brilliant. Well done, John.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-17223733039032880872009-12-17T06:07:55.377-08:002009-12-17T06:07:55.377-08:00That sounds serious! :)
interesting observation.....That sounds serious! :)<br /><br />interesting observation.....here its often the lack of bed, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com